People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
Whether people attend colleges for new experiences, career preparation or to increase knowledge have been the epicenter of discussion in multiple forums and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. Different distinguished individuals have expressed their views both in favour and against the very idea of attending universities for many different reasons through multiple mode of communication be it a main stream media or be it the social media. Below in essay of mine I will try to enunciate that mostly people attend college to career preparation and for knowledge gain.
The most prominent reason is that people attend the college to obtain a good career. Moreover, if students leave studying after secondary school then they will not get a good high paid job. In addition, in today's world it in not easy to live wealthy life without high salaries. In addition, if people do not pursue a postgraduate or graduate degree than it will be hard to get hired by top companies and they will have to satisfied with some low level jobs.
On the other hand, some people who want to join their family business than they will attend college to gain their knowledge because without excellent knowledge no one can raise their business. Furthermore, when people attend college they will have a better atmosphere to talk in public and can get some good knowledge of how to deal with their clients.
While on the other hand, there are people who will still continue to wrangling about the facts of different reasons to attend college. I would like to conclude that mostly people attend the further study to get some knowledge and to achieve a better career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 348, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...very idea of attending universities for many different reasons through multiple mode of commun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, still, then, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95729537367 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63511056742 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544483985765 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6235498721 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.636363636 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37573517736 0.242375264174 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155832222765 0.0925447433944 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104653936007 0.071462118173 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228092913813 0.151781067708 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105850237883 0.0609392437508 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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