Personal development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, some people are focusing on their self development in order to be successful in their lives. Some people believe that personal development is pertinent to have a great career while others cite other reasons for success in career. This essay will discuss how important personal development is for a bright future.
To begin with, developing personal skills can be helpful in professional. Some people may not have the basic skills required for a specific profession, therefore by developing those skills he can have a success story. For instance, people who have weak communication skills are tend to suffer if they are working a marketing field. But if they can improve their skills, they can achieve excellent results. Therefore, developing one's skill is of prime importance to get better results in life.
Secondly, personal development is the prerequisite for becoming a good professional. As a human, everyone have some weaknesses, which can be overcomed if any individual is willing and by developing theirselves personally it can be beneficial for them working in any profession. For example, in cricket, a bowler may have low fitness level due to which he is unable to play for long time affecting his reputation. If he can work on his fitness level, his quality as bowler can significantly improve. Thus, it is necessary to develope personal skills in order to be successful in career.
In conclusion, development of personal skills can be beneficial in becoming a good professional. In my opinion, personal development is the most important requirement in advancing one's career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25291828794 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0686503446 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52140077821 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8405750925 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 6.9802955665 201% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274612862164 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122574069882 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791381250653 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208245601154 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509523163159 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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