personal development is the base for professional development for making a career what you are agree or disagree?
In today's fast paced life, personal development has become base of professional development. While some like-minded people foster this thinking that personal development is extremely beneficial for getting lucrative job in the future. My view points are in harmony with this ideology. The following paragraphs tend to highlight some important aspects of this issue.
To commence with, there are myriad of arguments surrounding my viewpoint but the most prominent factor needs to be considered is that sometimes, number of multinational frims only hire to well personality, good behaviour because well personality person easily handle any difficult situation which is extremely beneficial for company's growth. Moreover, if person have good behaviour , he or she speaks politly with their customer and these customer will gain choose this industry to visit.
Furthermore, personal development also learn about the heritage value, respect of old citizens and love with childern, which leads to profitable effect on youngster's live and these teenagers alway give respect to their family and support them. In addition to this, if person have good sense humour, he or she motivate to the other masses, who are fed up from their lives.
After analyzing to the given statement, it can be stated that personal development and professional devlopment are coreleated with each other. But, i firmly believe that personal development plays a vital role for achieveing profitable job in up-coming time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Moreover, if person have good behaviour , he or she speaks politly with their cus...
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Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this customer' or 'these customers'?
Suggestion: this customer; these customers
... speaks politly with their customer and these customer will gain choose this industry to visit...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'motivates'.
Suggestion: motivates
...erson have good sense humour, he or she motivate to the other masses, who are fed up fro...
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Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...veing profitable job in up-coming time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5807860262 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86595293059 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676855895197 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.9026575583 50.4703680194 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.8 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237949144742 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979267852418 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832606342459 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152344607422 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758961151204 0.0609392437508 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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