Polygamy has increased widely in recent years what solutions can you brought forward to decrease this issue?

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Polygamy has increased widely in recent years what solutions can you brought forward to decrease this issue?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world in a colossal upsurge in polygamy has increased widely in recent years all over the world. There are a wide range of factors that account for why this is happening. In my opinion, this problem can be remedied provided that some effective measures are taken.

There are a myriad of (reasons accountable for) / (consequences associated with) this soaring concern. Unlike everyday problems, which can be dealt with easily, polygamy has increased widely in recent years, which is extremely perilous can lead to an array of such issues as indulging in multiple marriages by men and women and financial problems. Thanks to the aforementioned predicaments, it is not only people but also society which can suffer immensely.

Steps to deal with this problem are many, but the most effective ones are in fact not remote or complicated but accessible and practicable. The primary one stems from the fact that by ensuring the implementation of set rules and policies, government authorities can help a nation thrive. Besides, international organizations and local authorities should take the necessary initiatives cumulatively. Only when convergent efforts from all sectors are ensured, can we expect to see some considerable progress in curbing the issue.

To conclude, dealing with polygamy has increased widely in recent years is one of the most prevalent that faces almost all parts of the world today. Nevertheless, the concrete steps as discussed above can effectively strengthen the fight against and alleviate this growing concern. Its potential impact is needed too dire to ignore.

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Average: 8.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...ctive measures are taken. There are a myriad of reasons accountable for / consequenc...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... impact is needed too dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, nevertheless, so, then, in fact, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34749034749 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98403047401 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610038610039 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.179196134 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.538461538 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258686281648 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792831881883 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669152119411 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162963084748 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668149233637 0.0609392437508 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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