Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid
more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of the wage of professional workers and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of making an effective contribution is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that considering more incentives can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, pivotal careers like teaching and healing people can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of important jobs, as well as working unsociable hours, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the impact of perks. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both having a steady job and job security apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, paying more to celebrities might increase the consequences of the unbalanced economy. Moreover, fundamental aspects of yearly income could relate to this reality that the demerits of sports idols pertain to famous actors. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of amateur artists is correlated negatively with enhanced salary. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of the entertainment world.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the pros of supporting professional workers far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of financial aids prove the significance of motivating labor force, but also pinpoint pension scheme implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76014760148 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17935172523 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686346863469 0.580463131201 118% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8196844639 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.083333333 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.12807881773 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.33497536946 394% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11689663719 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034402317784 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0194584086643 0.071462118173 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0315289043954 0.151781067708 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309691771942 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 11.5310837438 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.96 8.32886699507 132% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 55.0591133005 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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