Pros and Cons of extreme or adventure sports?
In present world, role of extreme sports was always a controversial topic. Many people state that adventure sports play an important role to create awareness about potential danger while others argue that these sports pose extreme life threatening and children are getting influenced. In my opinion, the benefits of extreme sports over weighs disadvantages. This essay would further elaborate both sides of the statement with justifying reasons and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To start with, these sports attract many spectators from around the world who contribute not only to the economy but also increase reputation of the hosting country. The main advantage of these events are it will provide employment opportunities to many people who are depending on these activities. It also provides an encouragement to athletes who are interested in these type of sports. For example, mountain biking championships conducted in New Zealand attracts many tourists from around the globe which create an influx of international currency for the economy. This example clearly exemplifies us there are numerous benefits from such sports and government should outline the safety guidelines for the participants by providing proper infrastructure.
On the other hand, these sports activities has disadvantages. Sports such as bungee jump has become so popular in recent years and hundreds of people lost their lives during this sport. Moreover, participating in extreme sports are dangerous for health and many people do show off and want to become a celebrity by doing this activities and losing their valuable life. For example, car racing is best example, driving a car to beat other participants involves high risks to win the race.
According to the arguments aforementioned, it can be concluded that the advantages of these sports events overweighs disadvantages and further the government should promote these events by providing funding and infrastructure requirements.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, such as, in my opinion, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1207.87684729 139% => OK
No of words: 303.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55775577558 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02012478211 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60396039604 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 379.143842365 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1903109943 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.285714286 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193522921364 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760304065873 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741357952497 0.071462118173 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122492337712 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914507066363 0.0609392437508 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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