Should Discrimination Against Older Workers Be Made Illegal?
Age discrimination in the workplace has been the epicenter of discussion in multiple forums and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. Different distinguished individuals have expressed their views both in favor and against the very idea of age discrimination through multiple modes of communication be it a main stream media or be it the social media. Below in essay of mine I will try to enunciate that age discrimination is unfair and it should be made illegal by government.
The most prominent reason is that when people get older company does not want to continue with them. Moreover, there are many surveys has been done and revealed that companies mostly ask the aged employers to take retirement early. Furthermore, they are forced to do so by saying that they cannot cope with the new technologies. In addition, that is unfair with them as chance should be given to them and some training as well to learn the new technology.
The government should impose some laws against the age discrimination to motivate the older people. For example, in USA now 1 in 3 workers found older worker and this can be increased by 1 in 5 by the end of 2030. In addition, if regime will not put some eye on this issue than in future USA will be highly under the workforce shortage.
While on the other hand, there are people who will still continue to wrangling about the facts of age discrimination. I would like to conclude that regime should make this activity illegal and should save older people's job by imposing some laws.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77985074627 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83838012956 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589552238806 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9366512229 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381933910452 0.242375264174 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121786101418 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105850438328 0.071462118173 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201816025029 0.151781067708 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991837790444 0.0609392437508 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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