Smoking has long been known to cause health problems for smokers, however the effect of passive smoking is becoming an important health issue. Discuss the dangers of smoking to smokers and non smokers.
Inspite of the published and known dangers of the habit of smoking, it must be accepted that this vice is extremely popular amongst all age groups since the teens. However, it also must be admitted that this causes serious and irreversible damages to both, active and passive smokers. The risks for both are discussed further in detail with reasons and examples.
Discussing the dangers of smoking to smokers the most serious one is the lung problems. Here, the lungs are affected the most and also loses its capacity and elasticity. Apart from this, smokers often encounter oral issues/disorders which means their gums are often infected, and this may lead to precancerous and cancerous conditions. Digestive problems, cardiac complications and psychological upsets are not quite uncommon amongst smokers. This clearly point out that active smokers can have multiple health dangers.
On the other hand, it must not be forgotten that passive smokers too face grave problems. To begin with, people around and near the smokers can experience incessant coughing and irritation is the eyes and chest. Infect, the most adversely affected victims are the infants as well as pregnant women. To illustrate this point I cite an example/article that mentions that constant nearness to smokers by pregnant women can cause equivalent harm to the fetus as that an active smoker would. It may also lead to inborn deformities. Socially, the active smokers pose a bad example to the younger members and in some cases it may also drive the passive audience to take up smoking.
Thus, it can be deduced that although smoking is popular and considered as style statement and a status in the society, my discussion transparently proves that there are health and other risks lurking for both smokers and passive smokers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, so, thus, well, apart from, as well as, in some cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18088737201 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69610316295 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57337883959 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7549231329 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227645550574 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699675135416 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071216341691 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147628088257 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606179003985 0.0609392437508 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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