In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move out of the cities and into regional area. Discuss its advantages and disadvantages?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move out of the cities and into regional area. There is a widespread worry that this will lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move out the regional area can not only contribute to industries and businesses to move out regional area because it’s very big area but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
There are, however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move out cities. The primary one stems from the fact that by observing the aforementioned trend, people have not only realized its gravity, but also gauged the magnitude of its repercussions when it comes to today’s ever changing lifestyles. Besides, its impact on industries and businesses is far reaching indeed. Hence, it is apparent why many are against some people things industries and businesses to move out cities because city is much crowed place.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks, the benefits of industries and businesses to move out cities and into regional place are indeed too great to ignore.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 308.0 242.827586207 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1038961039 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88789530307 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503246753247 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.7440613919 50.4703680194 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.25397266985 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42090442027 0.242375264174 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151475995491 0.0925447433944 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151780564521 0.071462118173 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264753348404 0.151781067708 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404350319588 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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