In some countries it is legal for citizens to carry firearms for self-defense purposes. In your opinion, should every country in the world make it legal for their citizens to carry firearms for self-defense purposes?
These days its very important to have self-defense capabilities as the crime rate is increasing day by day. However, some countries allow the citizens to keep firearms for self-defense which is a matter of discussion due to various reasons. The essay will further elaborate the reasons and explanations of citizens carrying firearms are legal or not, and thus deduce the dialectic conclusion.
It is very important to maintain the law and order of any country so that people should not fear for crime but in some countries the crime rate is high, which results in keeping firearms for people safety or self-defence. For instance, countries like Pakistan has active terrorism groups, so people have to keep weapons to protect themseleves.
On the other hand, nowadays, it has became a fashion to keep pistols or guns in house irrespective of self-defence, which has an adverse impact on society. Moreover, these days students also feel proud to have weapons during school time, which results in dangerous incidents. For instance, student was caught in United States after firing in the school and killing many people and students. I feel government should should not allow firearms just for the sake of self-defense but needs to be checked before allowing the person to keep firearms.
In conclusion, self-defense is really required in today's society but providing firearms needs to be monitor based on country and region.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... On the other hand, nowadays, it has became a fashion to keep pistols or guns in ho...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: should
... people and students. I feel government should should not allow firearms just for the sake of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, really, so, thus, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19480519481 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80713817565 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580086580087 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1687343343 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.25397266985 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391736229817 0.242375264174 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148365806378 0.0925447433944 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105770931816 0.071462118173 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234774951215 0.151781067708 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076138535813 0.0609392437508 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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