Some environmentalists claim that people who drive cars do not have a right to complain about pollution since cars also pollute. What is your opinion?
Pollution is the biggest problem of the modern world which is impacting human lives drastically. Recently, a debate on pollutions and it causes has stirred across the world, many people believe that cars and other vehicles are the root cause of it and they think that people who drive cars do not have rights to brag about it because they are responsible for it. Opponents claim that everyone should be involved in the discussion. In my opinion, pollution requires combined efforts and every citizen come forward to fix the issue.
Firstly, cars are great means of transportation and people who drive them use it for travelling from one distance to another. Although ignoring the role of cars is irrefutable, there are many other sources as well which contributes to pollution. For example, Factories, usage of plastic, deforestation, burning of leaves also contributes to air and water pollution. Furthermore, pollution is also impacting the lives of drivers as well, hence everyone's role is crucial to find out the solution.
Secondly, continuous and combined efforts are required to fight back pollution. Activists and environmentalists need society's view and thoughts to curb the pollution. For instance, a study conducted by Air quality departments claimed that factories are responsible for 40% of water pollution.
In conclusion, as per the aforementioned arguments, it is safe to say that everyone must be involved in taking a combined decision to stop the pollution and drivers must be involved in the process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28278688525 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01464166435 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577868852459 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7422321821 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.416666667 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.25397266985 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243698020454 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701443290728 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765748750315 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121938706401 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103164976725 0.0609392437508 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.