Some parents believe that reading books for entertainment is a waste of time for children and they think that their children should only read serious educational books.
What is your opinion?
In today’s epoch, reading plays an indispensable role in the intellectual development of children, because it enables them to comprehend about various things, which can be proved beneficial for them. However, some parents opine that children should mostly emphasize over reading educational books, rather than entertainment books. Thus, I am going to deliberate my reasonable views over this statement.
To begin with, children require myriad things for their holistic development, whether it comes to read books or to participate in any extracurricular activity. Therefore, entertainment books can result plethora benefits in their life. Firstly, children are of tender age, thus they cannot handle any pressure, and hence entertainment books can help them to enjoy their childhood because these books contain colorful pictures and interesting thoughts which sometimes assist children in broadening their imagination, which can bring unprecedented changes. On the top of that, reading should be a part of amusement for children, which can make them to refresh their mind; thereby they can easily pay heed on their studies.
However, educational books are very imperative in ensuring academic skills and knowledge to children, which is very essential in getting professional achievements in career owing to multifarious reasons. Firstly, reading educational books enable children to be more efficient in learning new skills and make them more developed, as a result they can achieve success swiftly. In addition, educational books make children to learn about crucial things, rather than wasting time in reading worthless content. For instance, it has been found that children in their tender age grapple things quickly, thus it is better to give them an exposure of educational books.
In conclusion, I reckon that parents should pay heed on their children and allow them to read that content which can help them in their future.
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first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 20.9802955665 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1207.87684729 137% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5777027027 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91994906434 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557432432432 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1268304 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.583333333 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.25397266985 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399756397631 0.242375264174 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16468098917 0.0925447433944 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794600281184 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257543799585 0.151781067708 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396619405879 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
automated_readability_index: 17.2 12.6369458128 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.