Some people believe that exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money that could be better spent solving immediate problems here on Earth.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
We need to look for exploration of outer space and finding something useful and important for future generation is a valid point. This type of exploration comes at a big cost.
Firstly, there are a lot of issues on this planet needed to be solved as soon as possible, such as climate change and global warming. Developed nations do not take it seriously and developing nations do not have time and money to spend on this issues. Similarly, there are a lot of incurable diseases which are killing a lot of people in certain countries on the planet. but no one seems to pay attention to this.
Secondly, the funding which is spent on space exploration can be spent on minimising climate change and global warming. Looking for an alternative solution for biofuel is an important task all nations should be looked into. There are many medical universities who are researching diseases prevention and medication including vaccination. they should be allocated for this funding.
Finally, we need to look after this planet and its habitats first. The contribution of monetary and other power should be balanced among all nations including education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: these
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Suggestion: They
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 1207.87684729 80% => OK
No of words: 191.0 242.827586207 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03664921466 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77504691715 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596858638743 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 379.143842365 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6339568822 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1666666667 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122225983649 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427074053416 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406309755193 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770518301523 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429708976777 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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