Some people believe that human behavior can be changed by laws; others argue that laws have little effect on human behavior. Which opinion do you agree with? Please explain.
These days, there is a controversial debate among people about the law effect on human behavior. There are a great number of people who interpret the law impact as thoroughly constructive, while others held on opponent view. I am inclined to believe that the human behaviour can be possibly controlled by the regulation.
There are several reasons why laws have capabilities to change behaviour. Firsts of all, It is argued that the regulations play a pivotal role in creating adroit people in society. This is attributed to the fact that these laws could create as feeling of accomplishment and competence, which consequently open avenues to new achievements so that people's enthusiasm and determination will be amplified towards many daunting activities. Harmful individual characteristics, for example, are controlled by the legal regulations.
In addition, it is claimed that some measures can be taken by the laws to stimulate in individuals social participation. This is to say that these social participation would instill a strong feeling of self-esteem in people so that they are more likely to perform up to expectations in society. Especially, a research conducted by Sydney University in 2015 has found that legal regulations enhance individuals' manner to make decisions related to social and personal.
To recapitulate, the foregoing discussion propounded the view that the laws impacts. It is expected that the law makers take cognizance of these facts and began to adopt more efficient method of regulations.
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Suggestion:
...uals manner to make decisions related to social and personal. To recapitulate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, so, still, thus, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41422594142 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25057480848 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610878661088 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9922754682 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.833333333 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235285180747 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807269664317 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721557490978 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130112770095 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959585775527 0.0609392437508 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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