Some people believe law changes human behaviour. Do you agree/disagree?
Recent days, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trends to see prodigies discussing the impact of law on human behaviour. While many progressively adore the ideology that law can change human behaviour, others despise it. This essay will prudently persuade how the law fails to alter people nature.
To commence with, the fear of punishment acts as a deterrent for many. More specifically, most people who wish to disobey law cannot do so because they have a fear of being punished and in long run, obeying rules become the part of their nature. In India, for example, earlier people used to refrain from following traffic signals, however, owing to the strict rules and fines, people nowadays, are abiding by these rules. Seen in this light, although, initially people abide by these laws due to their fear of punishments, gradually, it becomes their habit.
Despite the arguments above, government policies, sometimes, fail to encourage people to accept them by heart. In other words, because most citizens only follow them to evade from being caught, whenever, they get a chance and they are sure of not being caught, they break these rules. To illustrate, in many small towns in India, where the police are not very strict, people do not wear helmets, despite the law which enforces people to put on a helmet while driving two-wheelers. Thus, consistent with this line of thinking, although laws are in place for dwellers, they mostly do not accept them and believe in them.
In conclusion, there is ample evidence that only defining the laws does not change human behaviour. Consequently, I would recommend that government should run campaigns to aware the people about their benefits in following the laws.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04545454545 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53575584482 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601398601399 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2772508025 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267058958356 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097831576564 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068504025585 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170875601486 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552554752216 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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