Some people believe laws change human behaviour. Do you agree with it?
one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in people debating about whether the university experience is more important than the university degree. There is a widespread worry that this will lead to myriads of concerns as some people tend to believe that in the current world achieving a university degree is more beneficial as it aids candidates getting placed in good companies. In my opinion, the university degree needs to be given more importance than the experience and I will explain why in the upcoming paragraphs.
There is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that completing a university degree not only helps the student's entry easier for job positions but it has various other benefits as it empowers them with strong technical knowledge on up-to-date subjects. For instance, a recent study undertaken by a famous university in the new South Wales asserts that employees in the companies who have a university degree are more productive when compared with others who didn't have.
Another pivotal aspect is that when the employees are given new challenging works where they don't have the experience, they tend to use their theoretical knowledge and apply it wisely. A person who is unaware of this theory will try to handle using an incorrect approach. Hence it is apparent why a university degree is much more valued by the employers than university experience.
In view of the aforementioned statements, one can conclude that the benefits of having a university degree is more important in the present scenario.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04545454545 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89190591733 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556818181818 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7213760057 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.2 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0503618788663 0.242375264174 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.019697402029 0.0925447433944 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313064848218 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.026626260726 0.151781067708 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291270388966 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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