Recently, the phenomenon of different views about the purpose of education among people and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by may that it is highly beneficial to fulfill people's live, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that studying can be plus to create a good society, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support the benefits of education for the society members. At first, the studying not guarantied societies to make to make good people without any crime for them. However, the communities with studied people are always in a lower rate of crime. For example, people in countries with graduated individuals live in legal ways during their lifetime.
In addition, many people go to university to gain a high degree to find a better job in order to fulfill their life. But it is not only the one good result of education. A recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2018 has shown that a significant number of educated people are able to breed best children and wised individuals for their society.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on the effects of education, I profoundly believe that it is beneficial for all sides of human's life and communities all around the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06382978723 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87665239778 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629787234043 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8071478613 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.181818182 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252711083913 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841240073553 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440292706531 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133117543706 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720244592132 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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