Some people prefer to spend their holidays in resorts where everything is organized for them and they take little interest in the country they are visiting. Others prefer to travel around the country and to see how the people live, to get to know their customs and traditions and cuisine. Write an essay on which type of foreign travel you think is best for both the tourist and the local community.
It is an undeniable fact that human beings needs some time off from their everyday life to have recreation themselves and bring more zeal and zest in their life. Different people have different ways to go on holidays and have chosen various ways to enjoy the vacation exploring new places. However, I opt to travel without any pre-arrangements so that I will be able to explore the real lifestyle of the host nation.
There are myriad of benefits of going on holidays in this hectic schedule and the first and foremost advantage is to comprehend and exchange the global culture, costume, food, lifestyle and rituals. For instance, if a person from asia travels to europe, he/she would get a great opportunity to experience all the aforementioned subjects. In the same way, going on holidays without pre-booking not only contribute to visit one place but also provide chances to benchmark and choose the right process and accomodation , foods and lodging , etecetra. Thus, travellers will be benefitted by the plethora of activities if they travel without any lock in contract.
On the other side of the fence, there are people who enjoy their holidays confining in certain places with limitied activities. Perhaps , they believe that the vacation is jsut to relax as not to be distracted by involving in other activities.
To conclude, vacation should always be very exciting, relaxing and adventurous , in order to acheive all these satisfaction, exploration needs to be done by going to the destination or host country rather than being limited in one place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, for instance, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09338521401 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84985365577 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630350194553 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.2464199667 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.9 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149948860937 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590399676666 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388225138462 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889284439223 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446897457423 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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