Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful.
What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The importance of computer on our daily life, which was debatable, has one become more controversial. The substantial influence of people spending time on a computer has sparked the controversy over the recent years. It can be said that computers are a revolutionary invention for the development of human beings. The essay will elaborate pros and cons of using a computer and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons how a computer makes our life convenient the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that it helps us do the task fast in a click of a button. In schools computer offers an internet, which helps student research information about their project and furthermore, computers allowed students to connect globally. In a medical field, computers are used for x-rays and for surgeries so it has become an integral part of everyone’s life.
Nevertheless some people have an opposing view about the computer because people are nowadays dependent on computers making our life computer and complex. Children are addicted to computer games rather that outdoor activities which make our future generation more machine dependent. For simple calculation people are using computers. New computer software is introduced every year, which is complicated for instance; employees need to do training to upgrade their knowledge.
In nutshell, an electronic devices does our life easier in each and every field and furthermore, human needs to understand that computers are invented by human so we should not be dependent on a device which does not have brain itself.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
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Message: Did you mean 'upgrading'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: upgrading
...instance; employees need to do training to upgrade their knowledge. In nutshell, an ele...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25096525097 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92120092203 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590733590734 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9264962256 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264303537645 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103150123065 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676743091433 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16561138487 0.151781067708 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058518910375 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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