Some people think law changes our behaviour. Discuss.
The crime rates are skyrocketing day by day compelling the authority to legislate concrete laws to control our behavior. Indeed these impeccable rules control our practices but not always. In this essay, I shall discuss this issue in details.
To begin with, it is believed that law changes our habits as it enforces us to abide them. The people who break law, are most likely to be penalized from free community services to lifetime imprisonment. This punishment varies from country to country and their cultures. For example, strict traffic laws for speeding and traffic lights have impelled public to drive cautiously and under the speed limit. This has definitely reduced many minor or fatal road accidents. Thus, it has discouraged people to involve in any activities that may pose threat to others.
However, it is not always true. The person who is released after finishing their imprisonment can't be guaranteed that they will not commit next crime. We have seen many people who had committed the first offense are more likely to engage in the law-breaking activities as they might struggle to settle in a society. Thus, the law might not change our behavior rather it compels to involve in criminal activities.
To sum up, this essay discusses how the legislation can change our habit which is positive at sometimes but not always. Therefore, it is recommended to seek for a right balance to keep peace and harmony among people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ble rules control our practices but not always. In this essay, I shall discuss this is...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ased after finishing their imprisonment cant be guaranteed that they will not commit...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
... which is positive at sometimes but not always. Therefore, it is recommended to seek f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03333333333 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63616672462 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3582573486 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5333333333 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245282380035 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709994200554 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662039754005 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138423339658 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152525978076 0.0609392437508 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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