Recently, the phenomenon of this opinion that people could be identified by their born place, and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although many believe that the motherland is highly influential on people's prosperity, there are opposing viewpoint held by individuals. I am inclined to believe that born place is highly effective and I will analyze that thoroughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support the influences of born place on peoples living way. At first, they were successful in their life, some scientists that born in poor places like doctor Hesabi. However, the living place could direct the way of living in the bad direction. For example, people like criminals always grew in the middle of other criminals and bad people.
In addition, people can prosper in their life even in a bad situation such as poor places or living in a gang area. But, there are individuals such as Shakspere that flourished their talents when traveled to better places to live. Thus the living place such as district, the city, and the middle of the family is influential on peoples successfulness.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that despite the lack of any evidence in influences of born place, its effects on the life of people can change the way of success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03070175439 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73940992336 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7869791562 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.272727273 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26472343265 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103870490679 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571974461426 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153488185522 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531678795102 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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