Recently, the phenomenon of hard-working for a successful life, and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that working for long hours cannot be highly beneficial to achieve prosperity, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that having free times can be a plus for them and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to dismiss working hard without leisure time. At first, the advantage of working until the late is making the best financial situation for the family. However, people will miss the best times of their life. For example, they missed many good hours with their family members such as entertainments and traveling with their family.
In addition, working for a good financial situation is important for well-being. But, hard-working can bring mental diseases and spiritual problems. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers has shown that a significant number of parents in wealthy families involved mental diseases such as depression.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that the drawbacks of working a lot of hours every day far outweighed its benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42180094787 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99948708957 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635071090047 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7471291584 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.25397266985 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259392276962 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979177334762 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457716782435 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140020078412 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664891171669 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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