Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Recently, the phenomenon of working students and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although it is believed that working and studying at the same time is highly detrimental and has some irrecoverable effects, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I profoundly inclined to believe that student should spend their precious time on practicing and studying instead of being under the pressure of working condition. This essay will examine causes and solutions for them by providing some academic evidence before concluding.
From an academic standpoint, the first job of every student is to pay enough attention to their education courses to fulfill the university requirements. Most of the students who tend to study abroad should use their own budget to pay their tuition fees. As a result, they have to stay in school and at the same time spend some valuable time working to meet their financial needs. According to an academic survey conducted by Tehran University, 49% of foreign students experiencing the sense of lacking behind schedule for their university projects while working on part-time jobs. Hence, although they may earn some money to fill their financial gaps, they feel many pressures from their education curriculum.
Within the realm of high-quality education, spending some new courses abroad could be a significant way to gain some sufficient experience in that specific field. Moreover, governments could provide more scholarship opportunity for students, so they could studying abroad without the pressure of bad financial situation or taking the loan. Not to mention that parents could support their offspring’s to avoid any misleading.
To recapitulate, I pen down saying that authorities have a major role to play in this situation by providing funding and financial support for those of talented students.
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Nowadays, it is obvious that…
Nowadays, it is obvious that working while studying has been a great tendency among a large number of students. This proclivity leads the students to the shortage of time for education and creates a heavy pressure on them. Here, I will discuss the causes of this and will give some possible solutions to it.
There is a plethora of causes of working while studying by some students. In my opinion, first comes the financial crisis they face because all the students aren’t financially solvent and don’t belong to rich family. Most of them have to support themselves financially to cover the high tuition fees along with maintaining other living costs such as accommodation fees, food expenses, transportation costs, personal costs and sometimes, sending money to the families also. Secondly, it is first-hand experience, which they are gathering by taking part in work while studying. The good thing of working while studying is the fact that they will not only gain money in the student life but also acquire the knowledge practically. It is also a great opportunity for student to attain with first-hand experience in the marketplace that will qualify them to compete with others in the job markets. To take example, a few of my friends got good job easily after completing graduation because of their prior working experience. Moreover, the high and increasing costs of tuition fees to pursuit of education is the main reason for this tendency that is hampering the education, as I believe.
In view of the above, I can suggest some possible solutions that can be a remedy to reduce this inclination. First of all, the government’s concern/involvement in this issue by creating more government colleges or institutions where students can get education with less tuition fees instead of private colleges or institutions. Then, secondly, all the institutions either privates or governments should minimize the tuition fees which would be appropriate for all class of students. They can also provide scholarship, study loans, some programmes or activities with financial rewards.
In conclusion, undoubtedly, it can be said that it has become a necessary for some students to work while they study despite of it’s negative impacts on their study life. However, both the government and the authority of institutions through some effective possible measures can reduce this tendency.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'study'
Suggestion: study
...opportunity for students, so they could studying abroad without the pressure of bad fina...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48657718121 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97044318642 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 139.433497537 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604026845638 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4713354621 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.769230769 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184278792068 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066402246477 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044740534677 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102263811676 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569026021911 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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