Student travel to study is overrated, we have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel really required for higher studies?
Student travel to study is overrated, we have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel really required for higher studies?
The education is a fundamental need of any country as it builds the future of the country by educating youth. These days students prefer to study abroad for higher studies due to many reasons. However, some people believe that the students should study locally. This essay will further elaborate the reasons and explanations for the notation and thus deduce the dialectic conclusion.
At the outset, a myriad of benefits can be attributed the importance of studying abroad such as better job opportunities, increase knowledge by interacting people with different cultures and many more. For instance, underdeveloped countries do not have advanced technologies that can help students to understand the globalization which is happening around the world.
On the other hand, brilliant scholars prefer to study abroad by taking the education loan for paying university fee and daily expense. Moreover, students work extra hours along with studies to cover their expenses. Hence it would be difficult for the student to study along with the job. I feel that the government should upgrade universities with intelligent faculty, so that the students prefer to study locally, which will be beneficial for country growth.
After analyzing, it can be concluded that studying abroad is an important factor for student's career, but if education quality is increased locally then there might not need to study abroad.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...g with studies to cover their expenses. Hence it would be difficult for the student t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, thus, for instance, i feel, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4398340249 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79438323714 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597510373444 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9756611453 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.846153846 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.532589151177 0.242375264174 220% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.236197238423 0.0925447433944 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.230349851564 0.071462118173 322% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.368265476744 0.151781067708 243% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.321551304475 0.0609392437508 528% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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