With technology speeding up, more and more young people begin to use mobile phones and the Internet, but old people have little chance to be exposed to them. What ways could mobile phone and the Internet be useful to old people? How can old people be encouraged to use this new technology?
In a rapidly changing world and era, the use of new technologies such as mobile phones and the Internet have been drastically increased by the young whereas the older generation have little opportunity to be exposed to them. This essay shall delve into how the mobile phone and the internet could be practical for the senior citizens and ways to encourage them to use such technology.
To commence with, a variety of reasons can be offered to explain why these new phenomena can be useful for the previous generation. Foremost among these, It is believed that these technologies have brought significant changes to our lives. To cite an example, these novel approaches are responsible for making an excellent and comfortable communication with kith and kin even in faraway places at an incredible speed. Further, needing to medical healthcare far more than the new generation, the older individuals would be able to make the most out of these advancements. Hence, the importance of using such advanced technologies in terms of usefulness is being evident.
Further and even more importantly, though, there are many and various ways for the older dwellers in order to be attracted by such innovations. To give an example, raise their awareness of the various ways that such things can be helpful is what should be seriously taken into account which may be overlooked. Meanwhile, if the youngsters can teach their grandparents about these useful gadgets, they will be able to learn very soon. Given that they have a great deal of free time, they can listen and watch different subjects on the net which are so amusing. It is, therefore, revealed that why adolescents play a crucial role in this regard.
To recapitulate, it can be said that had the older had the chance to learn concerning these new approaches, they would have been competent to live their life as comfortable and delightful as possible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to concern'.
Suggestion: to concern
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 318.0 242.827586207 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01886792453 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82609067393 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 139.433497537 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578616352201 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7454139298 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.769230769 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301388795723 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110998963914 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827492266294 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186891066554 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951860421271 0.0609392437508 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.