These days some people are involved in dangerous activities such as extreme skiing, motorcycles jumping, Are you in favor? If yes then why?
Recent days, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trends to see prodigies discussing whether extreme sports activities such as skiing, bike jumping etcetera are good for people or not. Every individual has a distinct perspective in this regard. This essay will elaborate both sides of the argument to prudently persuade why these games are dangerous and should be avoided.
To commence with, these games are risky and can have dreadful consequences. More specifically, people who indulge in such activities are jeopardizing their lives, especially when these actions are done by a novice and without any proper guidance. In India, for example, every year many accident cases are reported where youngsters have died while performing motorcycle race or stunts. Seen in this light, it is evident that these games are life-threatening.
Despite the argument above, one school of thought believe that these games are very entertaining and thrilling. Moreover, some teenagers do such actions to boast in front of their friends. However, risking one’s life only to add thrill or show-off, seems to be foolish. Therefore, consistent with this line of thinking, these actions are life-risking and have no positive effect on an individual or on the society
In conclusion, I radically feel and believe that people should not be involved in extreme games. Consequently, I would suggest that government should step forward and should ban such games.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35807860262 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85042141992 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663755458515 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7470283416 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.25 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209515366099 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627619525955 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046605665499 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115434400374 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038457605906 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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