Tobacco, mainly in the form of cigarettes, is one of the most widely-used drugs in the sorld. Over a billion adults legally smoke tobacco every day. The long term health costs are high – for smokers themselves, and for the wider community in terms of health care costs and lost productivity.
Do governments have a legitimate role to legislate to protect citizens from the harmful effects of their decisions to smoke, or are such decisions up to the individual?
Our economy is getting addicted to cigarettes and other harmful drugs day by day. On the contrary, these people are aware about the ill effects of smoking, still they tend to smoke tobacco every day. In my opinion, both the parties have a vital role to play in curbing this problem.
Firstly, governments should put their foot down on the restriction policies and rules. As a result, teenagers are also becoming a prey to this deadly habit. Moreover, they encourage their peers to do the same. For example, their was a recent report on how the senior school students encouraged their juniors to try smoking tobacco. Eventually, they ended up in hospital because they couldn't handle the situation. Therefore, governments should impose some stricter laws to protect the citizens of our community.
Secondly, one should realize that the smoke emitted from the tobacco is harmful for the community, especially for the children and elderly people. The children and the old people are in a crucial stage of life where they should be properly nurtured and taken care of. In a recent study, it has been proven that most of the old people are sick due to the smoke emissions from tobacco. A smoker should look into the problems which affect the community at large.
Drugs are increasing enormously everyday and the people are ignoring this blindly without knowing the long term costs. To conclude, the government and an individual, both have certain responsibilities that they need to fulfill on their behalf.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01593625498 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56993420779 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625498007968 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1302385363 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.9333333333 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.25397266985 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175028595833 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507005066307 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599947723595 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985223060742 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424644194466 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.