Is tourism in less developed countries advantage or disadvantage? Discuss your views and give your opinion.
In today’s world, it is a point of contention whether tourism is beneficial or not. While there are certaily valid arguments to claim that tourism is detrimental to a great extent, yet I still believe that the tourism industry has brought significant changes to our lives. Therefore in this essay, the primary reasons associated with this trend will be discussed and focused on.
To begin with, one point which I believe to be absolutely pivotal is the fact that the industry enhances cultur clashes. Without a doubt, exposing to Western culture, for instance, people tend to make more sense of cultural differences and it enables them to make an improvement in their connections, in particular, for business purposes and social skills. Thus, this makes it clear that holidaymaking industry is the backbone of every countries in the globe to revolutionise the way they business and live.
Further and even more importantly, though, this is particularly so given the fact that such businesses are correlated strongly with the development and increase the number of job oppurtunities, especially when it comes to developing countries. Although such industries sometimes have adverse impact upon the flora and fauna undeliberately or even deliberately, ultimately, it might lead to address and boost the economic growth and development of thirld world countries. After analysing this, it should be taken into account that holidaymakers has often become an integral part of underdeveloped nations.
Overall, I once again reaffirm my sentiment that even though tourism has a great deal of demerits, there are many and various reasons to support and take full advantages of holidaymaking which do outweigh its drawbacks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in particular, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38745387454 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05451260413 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638376383764 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3426598566 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 104.977214359 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0875169888978 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322305070783 0.0925447433944 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0234201346649 0.071462118173 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0513213260152 0.151781067708 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239890281383 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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