Is tourism in less developed countries advantage or disadvantage? Discuss your views and give your opinion.
In this day and age, there is an ongoing debate about tourism. While there are certaily valid arguments to claim that tourism is detrimental to a great extent, as far as I am concerned tourism industry has brought significant changes to our lives. Therefore in this essay, the primary reasons associated with this trend will be discussed and focused on.
To begin with, there are several reasnos why I support the industry as it enhances cultural clashes. First and foremost is that every member of the public can be familiar with cultural values of other nations thanks to tourism industry, which, in turn, result in societal cohesion in the world level. Further and even more importantly, though, exposing to Western culture, for instance, individuals have great tendency towards being more familiar in this regard. Thus, this makes it clear that holidaymaking industry is the backbone of every countries in the globe.
Further, this is particularly so given the fact that such businesses have great potential to make contribution to increase the number of job oppurtunities, especially when it comes to developing countries. Although such industries sometimes adversely affect on the environment undeliberately or even deliberately, it might lead to address and boost the economic of thirld world countries. After analysing this, it should be taken into account holidaymakers has become an integral part of underdeveloped nations.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my sentiment that even though tourism has a great deal of demerits, there are many and various reasons to support and take full advantages of holidaymaking which do outweigh its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3358490566 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94847167632 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649056603774 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.054643889 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.545454545 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0753969349562 0.242375264174 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279965234805 0.0925447433944 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0233363306842 0.071462118173 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0466452813438 0.151781067708 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241168895945 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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