University experience is more important than a university degree Some people argue that university life is much more important than an educational degree in job market do you agree or not agree

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University experience is more important than a university degree. Some people argue that university life is much more important than an educational degree in job market, do you agree or not agree?

In recent years, governments have provided a lot of money for education to produce a great generation to be in right position of jobs. They design colleges and university with high quality of science and education. Also, they provide a staff of excellent teachers. On other side, experience is more required in jobs environment. Many companies prefer the persons who have a lot of experience and practical training. These corporation send these employees to real area of works to gain experience. Some people believe that knowledge is more significant than experience. In this essay, I will argue about the effect of education and experience at work.

It is true that education may be the foundation of good experience. Government has devoted more time to developing education around schools, colleges and universities. As a result of education, people can hold many skills and tools which help them in their jobs. Also, education works to increase the high level of people thinking and ideas. Furthermore, academic study people can gain several features for many sectors of life such as arts, sports, science and engineering. Regarding education we can handle any difficulties in our path on life because we have proper technique. Moreover, people who have real skills, tools and techniques will be successful in any sector of works. That means, some people give foundation of education to be successful on both their jobs and life.

On the other hand, the people who have experience are more employable than people who do not have work experience. Moreover, the human resources in many companies or directors mention in their announcement that experience is the main condition for hiring and rewarding. In fact, there are special items which make experienced people more wanted in the variety of jobs . For example, experts can handle the stress of complex issues, flexibility to deal with any problem that face them and they do not need for any training or courses. Men or women who have experience are always perfect on job results and are more effective than other people without experience.

In conclusion, there is a strong relationship between education and experience for anyone looking for real success in the job. Education depends on the theory but experience is based on practical application. From my point of view experience and education are the extremely important to reach achievement and high quality in the jobs.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 8.36945812808 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 31.9359605911 172% => OK
Nominalization: 40.0 5.75862068966 695% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2045.0 1207.87684729 169% => OK
No of words: 396.0 242.827586207 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16414141414 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 3.92707691288 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83385278302 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 139.433497537 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510101010101 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 379.143842365 171% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 12.6551724138 190% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5003654947 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.2083333333 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 6.9802955665 244% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251459974392 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720537958808 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574614779889 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15205516589 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281581182174 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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