Value added by travel in Education. Is travel a necessary component of education or not ? Will student sitting at home have more knowledge?
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Student travel to study is over rated, we have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel really required for higher studies?
Today, education spread across borders and more and more students are traveling foreign countries for higher studies. As per my opinion traveling for education is always beneficiary.
Firstly, today many nations do not have proper infrastructure, education system and expertise to build career of young and enthusiastic scholars. In such cases, these students do not have any option other than traveling to developed countries for post graduation. For example, millions of students every year from developing nations like China and India come to USA for study in their interested field for which there is no proper course available in their home country. Therefore, traveling to other nations always good for students and foreign nations.
Secondly, Because of such traveling we can able to create multicultural society in which there is a space for every religion and group. People can absorb many important skills from other cultures and same way can teach same skills to other communities. For example, Canada and Australia have multicultural societies created by different groups traveled from different countries and all are living peacefully without any major problems. So traveling for studies helps student to learn culture of foreign nation and same time give him a chance to spread importance of his own culture.
In a nutshell, students who travel for education have more visibility, adaptability and courage than students who prefer to stay at home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42358078603 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76712593608 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593886462882 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3045646029 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.909090909 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265296199779 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122940351767 0.0925447433944 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716096328242 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20087431782 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559808311637 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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