Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree?
one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that violence portrayed on tv and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. There is a widespread that this will only lead to myriad
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that to watching violent movies can not contributes to one's life but also leads to numerious other benefits in various fields. Thanks to wide range of advantage it offers, not only one can benefit more when it comes to being effective but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand in good stead as far as augmenting their chance of propesirity and excellance is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposindied is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follow such a system can they broaden horizens, thus learning such essential attributes, dedication and perservance. Hence, it is apparent why many are favour of watching violent movies.
In the view of arguments outlined above one can conclude the benefit of watching movie are instrumental indeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01382488479 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77384139719 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599078341014 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2377864008 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.888888889 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.25397266985 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202990253375 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831383033864 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107444029872 0.071462118173 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136846551796 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112435007995 0.0609392437508 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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