In 20th century many inventions are invented for many reasons. Aeroplane, medicine and computers are the most important inventions.I personally feel computer is the one of the greatest in 20th century.In 1950 computer was invented,from that many changes happened in computer industry.When computer first introduced by the inventor,it was big room size instrument.At the same time,we are using very little size.I will explain the important of the computer in the below paragraphs.
Firstly Computer was invented for the calculation.In earlier days computer was within a second it calculated the very complex mathematics problem and solved puzzles.Mostly,it was used for the mathematical benefit.Super computer was big room size and it solved the problem in milliseconds.Now a days computers mostly occupied in all the industry.We can say without computer people can not live in the current world.
Moreover,Computer reduced the work time in many industries,also reduced the man force. It saved the cost and timing.In movie industry computer helped in graphics and visual area.Computer made a revolution in movie industry.Now a days we can create a movie without any actors and without single day shooting.In single computer can create and develop the entire movie.Animation movies are very famous in current world.
In conclusion,Computer is the greatest invention apart from aeroplane and medicine.Computer helped in medical industry in various way.As well as computer helped in aeroplane production and maintain the air traffic.We can not live without computer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, moreover, second, so, well, apart from, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71794871795 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47764533758 2.71678728327 128% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542735042735 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.5024630542 190% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.861238037 50.4703680194 283% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 223.0 104.977214359 212% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.0 20.9669160288 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.25397266985 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.33497536946 544% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0879991775685 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735388907714 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885058236763 0.071462118173 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705661911035 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646947106603 0.0609392437508 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.0 12.6369458128 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.97 53.1260098522 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 10.9458128079 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.49 11.5310837438 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.94827586207 211% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.3980295567 169% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.5123152709 200% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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