What are the positive and negative aspects of the connection to outside world including mobile phone, email and social networking?
Internet have made the world into the global village, mobile phones, emails and social networking are few out of many ways to connect. While there are so many advantages of this, there are also some negative impacts of it. This essay will discuss the both pros and cons of this phenomena.
Internet use has become so vital that now governments in some countries provide ease of access. People who want to learn and explore about the different cultures prefers to stay connected most of their time. Internet users joins the social networking not only to learn and explore about the different cultures but also to share their knowledge and lifestyle as well. In short, people enjoy staying online more.
On the other hand, internet has also part ways family relationships. Some people spend their whole time on internet which creates difficulties in their personal life and relationships. For example, people who get addicted with internet, does not spend proper time with family and kids which leads to broken families. Thus, internet can be blamed for the unhappy personal life.
Internet has its positive and negative aspects. In my opinion if people spend appropriate time with family then its negative impacts can be mitigated and its positive use can be beneficial.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun out seems to be countable; consider using: 'few outs'.
Suggestion: few outs
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... will discuss the both pros and cons of this phenomena. Internet use has become s...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ways'' or 'way's'?
Suggestion: ways'; way's
... the other hand, internet has also part ways family relationships. Some people spend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, in short, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09047619048 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45411866312 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585714285714 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7185037918 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2307692308 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125009689226 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047491501389 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732282162108 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831858764892 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657650912789 0.0609392437508 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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