What is the best invention of the last 100 years, the computer, antibiotics or the airplane. Why? Explain with examples
The matter of discussion is a simple affair that is easily understood. However, the concerned task, personally I think, shows the importance of the matter and for this, we need to pay more attention to it. Certainly, the matter deserves a greater discussion. Now, I will explain my thoughts in detail.
Some important issues regarding the matter are stated in the following portion. To begin with, I would like to focus on the best invention of computer which shows the significant role in every aspect. Another fact is computer plays vital role in every aspects of human life to do any work easily that has a great importance in relation to such cases. More importantly, it is also true that this plays a vital role which is needed for anything to be more effective. In addition, outlook of the matter is absolutely necessary for us to have any useful outcome.
Side by side, there are some other views that are also vital which reflects the importance. First of all, the important fact is that the whole issue needs complete analysis. Moreover, they say that precise information is also an undeniable fact which according to them is pivotal.
Overall, I have logically described the whole issue with complete understanding. I believe that the topic has been thoroughly analyzed and requires no further explanation. Nonetheless, the issue should be resolved using a holistic approach.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 505, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
.... In addition, outlook of the matter is absolutely necessary for us to have any useful outcome. S...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, moreover, nonetheless, regarding, so, i think, in addition, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02155172414 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77197401191 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599137931034 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3130123206 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.6666666667 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4666666667 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0451925191237 0.242375264174 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0157707521046 0.0925447433944 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350195141863 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0241592893682 0.151781067708 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016459923283 0.0609392437508 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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