Recently, the phenomenon of computer advent and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that it could make people more productive, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the services of the computer can make us happier, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support productive advantages of the computer. At first, people's exercise has become negatively very low, after the advent of the computer. However, it made the speed of works faster and faster. For example, the calculation and data processing in the works such as banking became faster and more accurate.
In addition, people used their mind less than before the computer invention, which brought us lower intelligence. But, the rate of mistakes in calculations has greatly fallen down. For instance, a recent research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2016 has shown that a significant number of large companies are using supercomputers in their data processing due to their lower faile.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that the benefits of the computer on the human's life far outweighed its drawbacks.
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...hat the benefits of the computer on the humans life far outweighed its drawbacks.
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but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35238095238 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99521916869 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638095238095 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8189761627 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.181818182 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121757994469 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414374242444 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390078820782 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658046208465 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415194173204 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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