Which should require more financial support from the government? Health or education? To what extend do you agree or not. Use your experience.
In recent decades, both health and education have become very important to the growth of human fitness and development. Many people believe that government should support both the fields providing proper finance. I strongly agree with the statement that government should concentrate more on health as it plays a vital role in everyone's life. This essay would further elaborate why the government should focus on health with justifying reasons and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To start with, there are several reasons can be supported why the government should pay and support for healthcare. Firstly, thanks to the government financial benefits and health schemes which are contributing to well being of many low-income individuals those who cannot afford the hospital expenses. Further, the healthcare departments and ruling governments have to work together with each other to initiate and take these schemes to remote areas where there are no hospitals available. For example, in remote areas, the government has to build more and more hospitals for rural people as they cannot commute to the urban areas for treatment. It is clear from the example that government should be more focused on supporting and improving health benefits for its citizens.
Furthermore, those people who diagnosed with dreadful diseases, it is difficult for them to go undergo treatments because of the cost to treat these type of diseases are very high. The government has to provide free treatments for chronic diseases and provide prescription medicines at free cost. It is considered that governments have to increase the financial budget for health care to improve the medical facilities in countries. Moreover, in some developing nations, hospital facilities and practitioners' medical skills do not satisfy the international requirement. This means that individuals must go to abroad for a more advanced treatment and have to pay the hospital fees by themselves.
In conclusion, governments are highly recommended to upgrade the hospital's facilities and build more and more hospitals in remote areas for rural people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended upgrading'.
Suggestion: recommended upgrading
... In conclusion, governments are highly recommended to upgrade the hospitals facilities and build more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as for, as to, for example, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1207.87684729 149% => OK
No of words: 329.0 242.827586207 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45896656535 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89005809082 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534954407295 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 379.143842365 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8984923163 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 119.733333333 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226206375964 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087383576314 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589133260997 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141348895633 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634737712787 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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