The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet and give the solution?

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The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet and give the solution?

One of the most conspicuous trends of the today's world is a colossal upsurge in people believing that world's governments and organizations are facing a lot of problems that can impact on the inhabitants. There are a number of factors accountable for why this is happening. In my opinion, this situation can be remedied provided some effective measures are taken.

There are a number of reasons in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that thanks to global warming which make a drastic impact on fauna and flora. Not only global warming can affect the ecosystem, but it can also produce such unpleasant consequences as an increase in pollution, ice-melting, droughts and so on that make a drastic impact on the environment. Needless to say, all these demerits have a far-reaching impact on the inhabitants of our planets.

Steps to deal with this problem are many; the most effective ones are not remote or complicated but accessible and practicable. The primary one stems from the fact that government and organization should make strict law in the favor of the environment that will bring desirable outcome. Only when convergent efforts from all the sectors are ensured, can we expect to see a considerable growth in curbing this problem.

To conclude, dealing with the inhabitant's problem is one of the most prevalent problems that face almost all sectors of the world today. Nevertheless, concrete steps as mentioned above can strengthen the fight against and alleviate this growing concerns, Its potential impact is too dire to ignore.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'inhabitants'' or 'inhabitant's'?
Suggestion: inhabitants'; inhabitant's
...oblem. To conclude, dealing with the inhabitants problem is one of the most prevalent pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, nevertheless, so, then, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09765625 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93706103352 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5703125 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2130955233 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180085880888 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656151044845 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768391672848 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11325228921 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474146670831 0.0609392437508 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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