Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by government and individuals?

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Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by government and individuals?

The effects of xenophobia, which was always debatable; has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of xenophobia has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this on people. There are many reasons of people have fear from strangers. And people now-a-days don not want to go another country and do not believe others. Here, I will discuss both reasons and solutions of xenophobia, thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

At the outset, there are many reasons of xenophobia which is among in people these days but the most conspicuous that lies in the fact that people have fear from strangers because some people from different countries do some harmful things to native people that’s why people have fear from strangers. Secondly, In north Korea, people of this country usually harm other countries people so people have fear of this country. Another key justification for upholding the notion is that relations between native and other countries are developing but governments do not aware people about this and this is the main reason of xenophobia.
There are some solutions of this problem, but the most alarming one is that government arranges some camps for people because if they aware people about relationship between native and stranger then people can easily trust stranger. Besides, government should have to organized some events where the people from different countries can participate so with the help of this people can communicate with other people easily.

From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of xenophobia is prominent. If government take some serious steps then it will be helpful for people who have fear from strangers.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...elationship between native and stranger then people can easily trust stranger. Besid...
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Line 4, column 368, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ies can participate so with the help of this people can communicate with other peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2202166065 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68548868854 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501805054152 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2747033199 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101291475258 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544887214948 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051348818722 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905477953436 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516328383806 0.0609392437508 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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