Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by government and individuals?

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Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by government and individuals?

Xenophobia is a mental state of a person which causes a fear of another unknown and stranger person which results in violence. Let it will be discussed in the following paragraph.

As we know, xenophobia is a fear of stranger person. It mainly occurs in the countries like South Africa. Large number of people in South Africa suffers from xenophobia. It is due to some previous bad experiences and some activities occurs with them in past. It leads to them to be violent. People who are suffering from xenophobia have a fear of people who come to their country for tourism or for any other purpose. They thought that the foreigners are cause harm to them and dangerous for them. So, to stay save they kill that foreigners and any unknown person. This mental state of people is not good at all. Various steps should be taken by the government and individually for that people. Such type of people does not get much knowledge about traveling, interaction with other peoples, behavior of other people. So, to avoid such type of thinking government take various steps like organizing sports meet, debates, official discussions, visitor camps. These steps are taken to aware the people about other countries and give them knowledge about how to interact with other people. Individually some steps are taken by the people like

traveling to other countries, increase knowledge about other people, interaction with people of other countries.
In conclusion, it is concluded that various steps are taken prevent such type of thinking among the people called xenophobia. With the change in time it will be decreased and people become well behaved with the people of other countries and strangers.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 31.9359605911 153% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01773049645 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59625087108 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482269503546 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.859075874 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6111111111 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27777777778 7.25397266985 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0894606885095 0.242375264174 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358199891965 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397495704242 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604239448139 0.151781067708 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00905339025734 0.0609392437508 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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