You are given climate as the field of study. Which area would you prefer? Explain why you picked this up the particular area of your study?
Specialisation in the field of climate has grown significantly in recent years. There are various fields in which a person can do specialisation but if I am given a chance I will choose the field of precipitation. This essay will discuss the importance of this field.
To begin with, the precipitation can bring a pleasant or disastrous change in the peoples' life . Knowing the causes, the intensity of the rain in a particular area can help people predict the results of precipitation and with modern tools prediction is much more reliable. For instance, knowing the intensity and duration of the rain, one can predict whether it will bring the floods or not. Therefore, in extreme cases if a flood is predicted timely, many precious lives can be saved.
Secondly, artificial rain in dry countries can reduce the burden on economy. With modern technologies such as cloud seeding water and energy demands can be fulfilled without burdening the natural resources. For example, UAE has been using the cloud seeding technology since two decades and now they have reduced their artifical water supply costs by using the water from rainfall. Thus, I believe that the field of precipitation will bring several opportunities in future.
In conclusion, a thorough study in the field of precipitation can be beneficial for mankind as well as it will give governments a chance to reduce the use of their natural resources for energy. These are the reasons which make me realise the importance of this field in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
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Suggestion: .
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Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...tation will bring several opportunities in future. In conclusion, a thorough study in ...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...me realise the importance of this field in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05577689243 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92282041677 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585657370518 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7707182056 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6153846154 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103523135419 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042033728955 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433689536292 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728285468517 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553006538781 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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