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Discuss a hobby or sport

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Sport is defined as activities based on physical performance, agility and entertainment for the audience and sailing, therefore, is not recognized as a type of sport by a vast majority of people since it doesn’t utterly satisfy any of the mentioned features. Unfortunately, nowadays a conversation, mainly about sports, refers only to those including a ball. From my perspective, any activity that requires an integration of technique and body command should be accepted as a sport regardless of the ratio. Sailing demands more technique and fairly less physical activity and entertainment. Therefore, it is exposed to an unfair treatment. I will prove why sailing should be considered a ...

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