Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people enjoy life more than old people do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is a very famous saying, “No man loves life like him that's growing old”. It is true to the core. Old people are like a small child; carefree and fearless. I strongly disagree that young people enjoy life more than elderly people do. Conversely, I think that senior people absolutely enjoy their life. They have enough time to enjoy the activities they like to do. Moreover, they develop a carefree attitude, because there is no insecurity. There is no fear of death, no stress of looking good and no hustle bustle to achieve certain targets. I would elaborate the two reasons which impute...
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