Imagine you have received some land to use as you wish. how would you use that land.
Imagine you have received some land to use as you wish. how would you use that land.
When I imagine that I would get some land, there are two things that come to my mind.
Firstly, I should use this land for some social purpose like build an old age home. Now-a-days, the children when they get adult they don't care anymore for their parents. I want to use this land to build an old age home where this kind of old people can live happily and don't being eschewed. Children mostly don't take responsibility of their parents and just leave them to live their last days of life. I would like to rejuvenate their life and make them feel better.
Secondly, I would like to donate this place to an organization or an orphanage or children without parents can live, play, study. Because whenever I see the children begging at the roads for money, starving for food I feel bad. I would be rather happy if I could help some children in living a happy life.
These are my two wishes I would like to make if I get some land. So that, In future I may feel proud of myself that I have done something great in my life.
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