television influence young people.
İmitation is innate with children, which means ther are born with it. it is a well undeniable fact that in childhood all young people imitate what they saw. there is a debate about this issue. most people belıeve that television programs, movies, and video games influence young people. to me; it is a well know fact that children are always willing to see magical things and televlslon provide this wish for children. another point is that people could not experience everything , sometimes we would learn through others life. so TV and movies procure this opportunity.
For one thing, from the past to the present , there have been a lot of records about child deaths which are caused by imitating duper heros on tv. in the 2000s all psychologist warned parents to limit watching tv for children.children dont have enough awareness to recognize which is real world and which is fiction.
Another point ı'd like to touch upon is experience.we do not have enought time to experience everything , sometimes we are be able to learn by observing/watching.movies are fiction we all know that. nevertheless we are learning someting from them. when we probe into the issue we can realize that the mean point is what they make us feel and how effective they are on children.
To sum up children are not as logical as adults, which makes them more vulnerable to be effected. we should be more careful about that and we should teach difference between real and fictious world on Tv.
Sentence: it is a well know fact that children are always willing to see magical things and televlslon provide this wish for children. another point is that people could not experience everything , sometimes we
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Sentence: Another point is that people could not experience everything, sometimes we would learn through others life.
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Sentence: mitation is innate with children, which means ther are born with it.
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Sentence: Most people beleve that television programs, movies, and video games influence young people.
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Sentence: To me; it is a well know fact that children are always willing to see magical things and televlslon provide this wish for children.
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Sentence: For one thing, from the past to the present, there have been a lot of records about child deaths which are caused by imitating duper heros on tv.
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Sentence: We do not have enought time to experience everything, sometimes we are be able to learn by observing/watching.
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Sentence: We should be more careful about that and we should teach difference between real and fictious world on Tv.
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