Would you prefer to be outside or would you prefer to be inside for your leisure activities?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Continuing their life, people should have fun and enjoy their free time anyway. Neither I do not know anyone who can address an individual that does not like to spend his leisure time in an enjoying manner, nor do I accept that someone tends to do so. Staying inside for leisure time is not bad; nevertheless, there are some more advantages not to stay at home. The reasons are discussed below.
The first goal of spending leisure time, as far as I am concerned, is to leave your daily environment and as a result, spending your free time in your house cannot be a good choice. I, personally, prefer to be outside and enjoy new places while inhaling fresh air and even walking through woods or parks. This can refresh your mind and your body to be ready for a new working week.
Almost most of our leisure time is vacations that are public and in these days most of our surrounding people, such as our friends, are free too. So we can schedule a meeting, a picnic or even a small journey with our close friends and enjoy our reunion while talking about some different topics, telling some funny jokes and having an absolutely unforgettable funny time that cannot be achieved indoors as like as what happens outdoors.
When you stay at your home for a holiday or a long vacation, you are limited to some boring and repeated electronic tasks. For example, one of the most enjoying electronic playing devices is PS3 which is completely known nowadays. I myself do believe that these playing devices will be unpleasant after a short period of time especially when you are alone. So, I would never choose this kind of time spending even if I have to stare at the wall of my office!
When taking into account all of these merits and drawbacks I have numerated, we may safely generalize the conclusion that not only going around for your leisure time is full of excitement, but also it will make you ready for coming new week and does not let you be bored through your free time, either short or long. These are the ideas on which I persist and never like to do differently.
Sentence: Almost most of our leisure time is vacations that are public and in these days most of our surrounding people, such as our friends, are free too.
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Neither I do not know anyone who can address an individual that does not like to spend his leisure time in an enjoying manner, nor do I accept that someone tends to do so.
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