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To you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn?


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By manna - Posted on 10 February 2013

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To you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn?

These days there are many considerable controversies about education. On one hand, there are those who argue that teacher’s salary should be decided according to how much students do well. On the other hand, there are also those who contest such a view. I completely agree with the former position because it is unfair and too much depends on the idea that a result is all.

First, I would like to discuss it is unfair that teachers are evaluated according how students do well. How their students learn depends on not only quality of teaching, but also quality of students. Among students are there those who are not good at studying. It is supported scientifically that there are people ...

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Sentence: Even if teacher try to work hard enough to let their students understand, their endeavor can be never valued.
Description: The fragment teacher try to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace try with verb, past tense

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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 358 350
No. of Characters: 1695 1500
No. of Different Words: 163 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.35 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.735 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.484 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.35 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.351 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.526 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.14 0.07
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