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To you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn?


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To you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn?

These days there are many considerable controversies about education. On one hand, there are those who argue that teacher’s salary should be decided according to how much students do well. On the other hand, there are also those who contest such a view. I completely agree with the former position because it is unfair and too much depends on the idea that a result is all.

First, I would like to discuss it is unfair that teachers are evaluated according how students do well. How their students learn depends on not only quality of teaching, but also quality of students. Among students are there those who are not good at studying. It is supported scientifically that there are people ...

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Sentence: Even if teacher try to work hard enough to let their students understand, their endeavor can be never valued.
Description: The fragment teacher try to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace try with verb, past tense

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