Talk about a specific time when you did something obsessively. For example, didyou “go to extremes” playing video games, worrying about an exam, or practicing asport or music? What did you do? What were the good and bad results? Explain

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There are a lot of 'and'. It means:

1. You didn't organize the content well. Always separate the content as two parts: first....second...

2. Use transition words like 'in addition' and 'furthermore' instead of 'and'