Personal Statement for Biology PhD

Doing research is such amazing work
Doing research is such an amazing work

flaws:
Don't use 'not only...but also...' a lot of times in one essay. One time is enough. You can use 'neither...nor' or 'either...or'.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 43 15
No. of Words: 974 350
No. of Characters: 5453 1500
No. of Different Words: 489 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.586 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.599 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.158 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 459 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 389 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 290 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 200 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.651 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.685 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.488 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.238 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.463 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.046 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 8 5