Some people think that more money should be spent to promote the use of bicycles in cities. Others, however, believe that cities should focus on investing in public transport systems.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different vies about how best to improve transportation in cities. While better provision for cyclists could be a good measure, I believe that further investment should be considered for improvement of public transport.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why some people believe that more money should be allocated to encourage the use of bicycles in cities. Firstly, these people believe that bicycles are an environmentally friendly form of transport. While motorized vehicles produce toxic gases, bicycles have no emissions. Secondly, bicycles take up far less space on public roads, which can help the traffic flow. Finally, this type of transport not only lets people have enough mobility and do exercise but also helps them reduce their stress and relax.
Despite the positive points mentioned above, I believe that more money should spent on public transport. In my experience, not everyone is able to ride a bicycle, for example it is impossible for disabled and elderly people to learn how to control bicycle on the streets. Also, public transport can be more useful in reduction of traffic, as bus, metro and taxi can carry more people at once compered to bicycle. As result, it would be better for governments to use the state budget for proving a condition in which the fuel of public transport is supply by renewable energies. Additionally, for long distances, using public transport is more convenient than cycling, which can be time consuming and exhausting, especially in bad weather conditions.
I conclusion, I hope cities will become more bicycle-friendly in the future, but spending money on public transportation should in priority.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24535315985 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86725807378 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609665427509 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4492461949 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.538461538 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336627126126 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127514637906 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865799513816 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21801473386 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310247084404 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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